Can you please answer? Is my poem good be as harsh as you want...?

I love it right up until the last line, but then it almost feels as if it just ended, like you weren't sure how to sum it up exactly the right way...however, if it feels the right way to you, then I am wrong. =D Poetry is the expression of YOUR own feelings, so if it feels right to you, then go with it. At the same time, don't ever settle for a line or poem that just doesn't seem right. Sometimes I write the same essential thing like 100 times before I get it right. =) Anyways, judging from this poem I would say you have a talent for writing. =)